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| MackayFire 2008-05-06 ch 3, | abuseThis is so cool! Please update soon :) Kenyon is also an awesome name |
| aurora borealis 2008-05-02 ch 3, | abuseWow, this is surreal. Strange. And funny. I can't wait to read more. :) |
| Twizler519 2008-04-14 ch 3, | abuselike nothing I've read before... |
| nonamefornow 2008-04-11 ch 3, | abuseI already love this story. But with me it doesn't really mean much. Put an 'all-right writing style', a 'supernatural' and a 'romance' in a sentence and I'm already fixated on the story. Add 'vampires' and I'm shivering in anticipation. Do these vampires in an unusual way and I'm in love. Easy. And I like the main character. Probably 'cause she's so me. I hope you'll update soon. |
| Mariela G. 2008-04-04 ch 2, anon. | abuseoh, please update this story! Don't throw this away- I love the humor, the budding romance( hopefully?), the suspenseful intrigue...it is such a refreshing breather from all the angst and wispy symbolism of the horse story, when it unraveled, and even the grim realities of SL. Please update this! It seems so interesting! I want to know more about Stevie. And Kenyon. God, I love his name- it just sounds hot. I hope something develops between them. I like kept rerererereading all the chapters just so I could sustain myself. But it has been...like 12-14 days since you updated! Practically 2 weeks! I am dying! |
| Latasha Gayle 2008-03-28 ch 3, | abuseha! i lurvv ur story. and i totally agree with the countless other reviews; who ever said you weren't funny is dead wring. gosh, i mean seriously. anyway keep writing! lol. tashi xo |
| katieee 2008-03-28 ch 3, | abuseI like this extremely well now. And it's getting extremely intense. I like it. :] And I like Kenyon. More than Benji. :] |
| MZ PEACHESZZ 2008-03-27 ch 3, | abuseKenyon...ah...Kenyon...gotta love the name too! Update!! |
| MZ PEACHESZZ 2008-03-27 ch 2, | abuseI LOVE this story now! Please update! You haven't updated for like a week!! This seems different and interesting- a supernatural romance!!YAY!! I can gobble up one of these stories in an hour or two. And there's a great market for stories like this now- you might get real lucky with publication, especially since you are an awesome author! I'm waiting for updates! |
| TCATH57 2008-03-27 ch 3, | abuseI like the humour in the story it makes it interesting. This last chapter was good but I think you should've had more people freak out but that's just me. I don't care what story you update even though i've gotten quite attached to SL (also says the people I sit by in Tecnology class) Update soon! |
| bellabewitched 2008-03-26 ch 3, | abuseok, whoever told you that you weren't funny, was just weird! You are! This is a wonderful story, as are all your others! I hope you finish SL soon, because I refuse to read it until I know it has an ending! |
| Anilem.LesLt 2008-03-26 ch 3, | abuseI love your stories, I really do, but it kind of irritates me that you confuse names (i.e. Sadie and Sassy) it's just all really messed up... though I am liking the plot. |
| eurtreve 2008-03-26 ch 3, | abuseI think the dry, strange humor is funny. In a quirky way. |
| Secret Heart01 2008-03-25 ch 3, | abuseYay your favourite reader is back (haha i say this with a sarcastic tone which cannot really be conveyed on a computer screen) Ok, I'm starting to get into Stevie's mindset .. I mean, yeah, she's SO not funny, but she's starting to 'make sense' as a character, if that makes sense at all ... Cool. Can't wait to see what weird vampiric twists would come out of this! ps: I'm travelling - therefore out of internet - a lot this month so my lightning speed reviews will no longer be in order. So ... just a nice warning in case you have come to expect it quick :P pps: congrats on winning the SKOW awards... I did vote for you multiple times ... :) |
| Mariela G. 2008-03-24 ch 1, anon. | abusePLEASE UPDATE THIS STORY- this story just went to number 1 on my radar- lets see where it goes!! |