|Reviews for Waking Dreams|
| Lorina Lee Belmont218 6/6/08 . chapter 2
I wonder what sin her sister had comitted...hm nice story so far...
| East-0f-Eden 4/24/08 . chapter 6
Intense. I can't wait to see what happens next! :)
| East-0f-Eden 4/8/08 . chapter 3
Insteresting. When you say he has sick green skin is he really sick or is that just being descriptive?
| rockonztar 3/19/08 . chapter 1
What a very interesting story you have here. The description is well written, and you have almost perfect grammer. The only thing that I would advise changing is the sentence that says: Laura found herself surprised at this dismissal of Laura’s question. I think you should use a different pronoun instead of repeating her name twice.
Other than that I enjoyed reading this. Is it a one shot or is this the beninning of a novel? Whatever. Good story!