Reviews for Once Upon A Dream

xxopticaldelusions 2008-03-23 ch 1,	abuse[ review game ] I love how the first line draws you in and there's just a feeling of loss and could-have-been (if that makes sense!). You described her really detailed and precise, and I particularly like "spider web veins". I can practically see her in my mind's eye. Great job (:
simpleplan13 2008-03-22 ch 1,	abusewhilst too-tight skirt... I feel like there should be an a there I really love this piece. The descriptions are really heartbreaking and powerful. The whole piece is wonderful... especially how the first line sets up the idea that there was such potential lost.
right2reality 2008-03-20 ch 1,	abuseRaw, honest and powerful. This is a good poem made great by an inspired ending line. Anyways, keep up the good work! -right2reality
camouflage 2008-03-19 ch 1,	abusesad and true. love the imagery. write on
ode to a nightingale 2008-03-19 ch 1,	abuseAs I've said, this is one h*ll of a raw poem. The descriptions are wonderful. I love how you ended the poem, btw. I think that's my favorite part. And, of course, thanks for the credit in the summary. :]
East-0f-Eden 2008-03-19 ch 1,	abuseit's very descriptive. I love the line that says she played her fairy tale backward.