haha! 'he almost makes lung cancer look sexy' that's funny! love this. keep writing.

Of all your stories (And I've read them all) this is the one I know the least. I'd like to see you develop it more. Also I don't feel it clicking between Chis and Lee. So you may want it to click a little more.

I love the story so far! Please continue it's really good! You have a great style of writing that's very refreshing. Nothing like the typical ameteur stuff.

Please update this story soon. I just love to read your works. ^_^

Very good start to this. I'm looking forward to reading more.

awesome! i love this. please write more.