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| demented cookies 2008-04-21 ch 2,  | abusehaha! 'he almost makes lung cancer look sexy' that's funny! love this. keep writing. |
| East-0f-Eden 2008-04-21 ch 2, | abuseOf all your stories (And I've read them all) this is the one I know the least. I'd like to see you develop it more. Also I don't feel it clicking between Chis and Lee. So you may want it to click a little more. |
| Trappedinabox 2008-04-07 ch 1, anon. | abuseI love the story so far! Please continue it's really good! You have a great style of writing that's very refreshing. Nothing like the typical ameteur stuff. |
| LetHaL feLinE 2008-03-27 ch 1, | abusePlease update this story soon. I just love to read your works. ^_^ |
| Esquirella 2008-03-19 ch 1, | abuseVery good start to this. I'm looking forward to reading more. |
| demented cookies 2008-03-19 ch 1, | abuseawesome! i love this. please write more. |