I love the flow of this. It's so fluid and free, just like the feeling that the words are describing. It really helped me get into the mood of the piece.

[lands of mist/Below which spread]
I didn't particularly like the stanze break there. It felt like an awkard place to take such a long pause.

Beautiful piece overall :)

~Sparkles from the Review Marathon (link in profile)

i loved your phrase "across this landscape, we drift"
brilliant keep writting =]