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| gothicHobbit08 2008-04-28 ch 5,  | abuseHm... If I had one criticism, it'd be that the chapters are too short. Find a way to work more of the background into the story, to make some of the context (culture, history...) apparent to the reader but not like an encyclopedia entry, you know what I mean? I'm hooked... keep writing please! |