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| .mate.feed.kill.repeat. 2008-03-21 ch 1, | abuseThis is really powerful, especially where you replace profanity with "you know what" and use metaphors and symalies instead of direct references. The ending stanza really pulls everything together. This is really unique & creative. Cheers. -stix- |