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| happilynuts 2008-07-02 ch 1,  | abusesorry if it isn't enough but the only word/s i have for your story is this: beautiful. =D you've made me speechless, it's the 20th time ive read it but this time i was reading it to maroon5's sunday morning and i just HAD to review=D i love it |
| MeAgain5tMe 2008-06-09 ch 1, | abusehah, sucker, you did GOOD. so stop whining. |
| A Rose in December 2008-05-13 ch 1, | abuseThis was so pretty! And very creative, I must add. |
| thoughtsofwisdom 2008-05-06 ch 1, | abuseAwesome! |
| Sing With The Elevator Musi... 2008-05-02 ch 1, | abusei like that. esp how he kisses her in the end. that was super cute. i like how you used simple sentences to state who broke up with who each time. the part where chelsea was dating him (supposedly) was a little confusing i'm still not sure if they were actually dating or not?? SWEM |
| Lily Llynn 2008-04-21 ch 1, | abuseIt's really abrupt, but I kinda like that. It's really sweet and cliche, but the plot is pretty original, and the writing's quite awesome, so I really like this. I love how they keep breaking up with each other / forgiving / getting back together. It's quite entertaining, and this is an excellent addition to our c2 from artistic dreamer. (: |
| Eternity is Calling 2008-04-12 ch 1, | abuseI loved this! it was so beautiful, and different. Very nicely written. xo liss :) |
| sushi 2008-04-12 ch 1, anon. | abuseI LOVE IT! |
| mia5081 2008-04-12 ch 1, | abuseThat was very sweet. And well-written. And a million other things, but suffice as it is to say: I really liked it =) Great job! ~Mia |
| shy green rock 2008-04-11 ch 1, | abusehaha this story is just too cute and sweet! |
| White Rose Blossom 2008-04-10 ch 1, | abuseAdorable :D -Aria |
| Camelia Sinensis 2008-04-10 ch 1, | abuseSweet. There's not much more I can say, except that it's sweet and real. |
| CarlyJo 2008-04-10 ch 1, | abuse:CLAPS: YAY!! Excellent! ~Carly =:3 ) |
| writingxonxwalls 2008-04-10 ch 1, | abuseAww I liked it! It was cute... and sad kind of... most really cute. Great job! - Brittany |
| Pop the Bubble 2008-04-10 ch 1, | abuseaw this is just simply gorgeous :) |