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| Needa S 2008-04-03 ch 1, | abuseI like the imagery in this piece. Awesome write. |
| simpleplan13 2008-03-21 ch 1, | abuseI really love the word choices and the imagery of the star.. really beautiful piece... the only thing is the second to last line seemed a bit long. Other than that it was really awesome. |
| Ellen Bee 2008-03-19 ch 1, | abusesweet! i really like imagery in the line "taking the words from my throat". |