Haha wow

Your stories are so well written.

I'm on chapter one, but it is so good I am afraid to continue reading in case I get hooked and it doesn't get finished.

I'm going to continue and am also trusting you to complete it so that I do not die of unfulfilled desire. :)

Good Chapter (:

Update soon

really intersting story so far, update soon please.

Good job!

I love the name "Karyn"!

:D

haha good chapter. still lovin the story

A few minor errors here and there, but otherwise great!

Update soon :)

update soon! luv it!

Let's just say it's great to have a reason to visit FictionPress on a frequent basis again...

Please continue son ;]

- Stella.

great start! I can't wait for his reaction to her showing up for dinner!

great beginning! and hey, i don't blame her for dousing him in water. if someone was creeping around my house in the dead of night, i'd do more than that.

there's a certain type of you know, like, innocence to the main but you also get the feeling that she knows what she wants and is able to stand up for herself if the situatoin ever arose.

tell me if i'm way off track. because chances are, i am.

can't wait for more!

loving it so far. i like the plot ] and the characters are very believable. D

i love Spongey. _

Sounds pretty interesting. And I definitely like the title!

Hey this is actually a funny story. I hope you review soon. I actually sprayed someone that came into my backyard; it turned out to be someone from school who was dropping off something from school. He still won't let me live it down.