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| She Had Somewhere To Go. 2008-05-16 ch 4,  | abuseGood Chapter (: Update soon |
| Jacoblover 2008-04-20 ch 3, | abusereally intersting story so far, update soon please. |
| superficialSagacity 2008-04-19 ch 3, | abuseGood job!! I love the name "Karyn"! :D |
| total vintage 2008-04-18 ch 3, | abusehaha good chapter. still lovin the story |
| She Had Somewhere To Go. 2008-03-30 ch 2, | abuseA few minor errors here and there, but otherwise great! Update soon :) |
| Classychik 2008-03-30 ch 2, | abuseupdate soon! luv it! |
| Karma.Rose 2008-03-21 ch 1, | abuseLet's just say it's great to have a reason to visit FictionPress on a frequent basis again... Please continue son ;] - Stella. |
| beeyouteefull 2008-03-20 ch 1, | abusegreat start!! I can't wait for his reaction to her showing up for dinner!! |
| katherine.kisses. 2008-03-20 ch 1, | abusegreat beginning! and hey, i don't blame her for dousing him in water. if someone was creeping around my house in the dead of night, i'd do more than that. there's a certain type of you know, like, innocence to the main but you also get the feeling that she knows what she wants and is able to stand up for herself if the situatoin ever arose. tell me if i'm way off track. because chances are, i am. can't wait for more! |
| total vintage 2008-03-20 ch 1, | abuseloving it so far. i like the plot =] and the characters are very believable. =D |
| spogebob's girlfriend 2008-03-20 ch 1, anon. | abusei love Spongey. ^_^ |
| Ivy Parker 2008-03-20 ch 1, | abuseSounds pretty interesting. And I definitely like the title! |
| junebug62194 2008-03-19 ch 1, | abuseHey this is actually a funny story. I hope you review soon. I actually sprayed someone that came into my backyard; it turned out to be someone from school who was dropping off something from school. He still won't let me live it down. |
| x.dynamite 2008-03-19 ch 1, | abuseNot a bad first chapter :). Keep it up (Y). |
| Nourgelitnius 2008-03-19 ch 1, | abuseI for one happen to love this story very much. And that is quiet something to be said seeing as it is the first chapter. I love the voice that your main character has and I hope that it doesn't change. She has a very real side to her and when she makes a joke, either meaning to or not, I can almost picture her face being straight and serious, as if to make her point even more clear. I hope that this is incentive enough for you to put more up for reading. |