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| dreamshell 2008-06-30 ch 5,  | abuseGood first arc. More? --Shell-- |
| The Crazy Talk Kid 2008-05-18 ch 3, | abuseThat's one of the most horrific things I've ever heard. ~Kdh. |
| Melissa Norvell 2008-04-27 ch 2, | abuseThis is definitely getting intersting. Too bad the chapters are so short. You should try to write something a little longer. |
| dreamshell 2008-04-17 ch 2, | abuseGlad to see this is picking up. Looks promising. However, two things; First; The quote is actually "strange aeons", not "stranger". That said, the play on words still works, as if implying even more strangeness than previously mentioned aeons of strange quality. =D Second; Dude, I've brought this up before and I *really* think your stuff could benefit from some editing. I realize you write fast and have a lot of other stuff on your plate, but maybe you could get a beta... Oh. O_O Uh... Oh, alright, Jave. I'll be your editor. XD --Shell-- |
| The Crazy Talk Kid 2008-04-16 ch 2, | abuseWow... that was kinda twisted. Good chapter, no glaring grammar issues, and my only complaint is length. Kdh. |
| Melissa Norvell 2008-03-31 ch 1, | abuseThis is simply amazing, as are all of your works. I am finding myself to be quite the fan of yours because of your unique ideas and beautiful storylines. Do keep up the good work! |
| Bingster 2008-03-26 ch 1, | abuseVery interesting start! I really like this so far. |
| The Crazy Talk Kid 2008-03-20 ch 1, | abuseI very much agree, fact is stranger than fiction. Not bad at all and I'm sorry but I couldn't find any gramatical faults. Best of luck with this one. Kdh. |