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| xxxTwilightPrincessxxx 2008-07-20 ch 1,  | abusewow... i really love this poem. keep up the good work! |
| MaryZeppelineWinchester 2008-07-02 ch 1, | abuseaw! i really like it! your really good! keep up the good work! |
| Shadowe Goddess 2008-06-21 ch 1, | abusewow... beautiful.. i hope that whomever you fell for loves you back |
| Skystripe 2008-05-26 ch 1, | abuseI love it, great, amazing job. |
| Sebastian Osprey 2008-04-30 ch 1, | abuseFantastic job; I adored this line: "Your eyes are all that can hold me still" wonderful Osprey |
| The Hippie Nerd 2008-04-24 ch 1, | abuseA sweet, lovely little poem. The emotion comes across strongly and clearly. I especially love the last few lines. Good job! |
| Take the Money and Run 2008-04-20 ch 1, | abuseThis is powerful, strong, and beautiful I love it. The way it starts out is good. "You have a gift that I hope you know That turns two people into one soul" I love those lines! I'm not sure about the third line, though, it seems like 'melt' is supposed to be 'melts' or 'melted'. And in the line "Its only you that make me feel this way," it should be makes. Awesome job otherwise. SB, courtesy of the review marathon |
| xxInsanityxx 2008-04-19 ch 1, | abusei really like this, and it is powerful, i can relate |
| romance at short notice. 2008-04-15 ch 1, | abuseBah I loved this line! "And when you smile its all worth the while" because I know EXACTLY how that feels. I'm such a romantic. x) thank you for your review! |
| jrsparkus 2008-04-15 ch 1, | abuselove it! you out did yourself here, i love the live"That turns two people into one soul". most people would write something about you keeping me from shattering or something along those lines, but that single line gave it the braeth of life all great poems have. Kudos!! skraps |
| silverscreen crush 2008-04-13 ch 1, | abuseThat was a cute one. |
| Katrina Zeffirelli 2008-04-11 ch 1, | abuseThe rhythm is a tad off, but still this is a great poem! I can relate very much. Love the lines "You have a gift I hope you know/That turns two people into one soul" Keep it up! --Katrina Zeffirelli |
| alluring lies 2008-04-10 ch 1, | abusethis was pretty & a well treat, you painted pretty colours and images with this poem; like this line... "Breathless to the point of turning blue" it really strike me. & it was just perfect. |
| East-0f-Eden 2008-04-09 ch 1, | abusenice rhyme scheme. I think it would make an excellent song! keep writting! |
| KatieTheWriter 2008-04-09 ch 1, | abuseAw what a sweet poem! I loved it :-) |