wow ok in full sentence it means that was great ... gladys is such a strong woman and so shy i like her. she is like a mix between buffy or max in dark angel and tara in buffy (feel the fan here ?). i love what you did with the caracter, the army, captain jack and the cousin, the atmosphere so haunted. Everything is well writen and coherent. thank you that was great reading you please get going ! i will definitely read the rest of your work.

i love the story!
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yay high five i'm british too XD i swear fp is like 99% american or something so stumbling upon this fic set in the uk is rare, ie i get what you mean when you say "east enders" though i don't watch it myself.

i really like the story so far!

cheers

Goddamn this is friggin INTENSE.
Her father was--wow. I hadn't even really thought about her parents up until this point.
I LOVE this story :)

Is Major a higher position/status/whatever, than captain? Because I'm not very familiar with the army but i think it's lieutenant...major?...captain...corporal? general? i don't know.
i kinda get lost after the first one :P

I notice you tend to accidentally misspell words, like quite with quiet and witness with whiteness.
STILL LOVING THE STORY :)
but wanted to point that out. :)

oh DANG. i like the way you ended that, sorry i forgot to review in the second chapter... i was kind of immersed in the story :P Probably a good thing for you to hear!
I like the way you ended this chapter, he's SO smooth
heehee... i LIKE this story ;)

I like this story so far, like a LOT :)
I think that sometimes your writing gets a tad confusing because your paragraphs are REALLY long and especially with works over the interent, people tend to skim longass paragraphs :$
Anyway, so I had to backtrack a few times, but it's okay. I like this story a lot so far, it seems quirky, interesting and lovable. And I love what i've read so far :)

Okay, so I realize that you've already finished the story, and it's kinda pointless to review on a chapter before you reach the end, but I just had to point something out. The protagonist is the hero of the story, not the villian. That's the antagonist. Sorry, but I'm a bit of a stickler for details, and it was bugging me. Other than that, I absolutely love it!

Hello again!!

Gladys is so kick-**! Those evil sand monsters totally reminded me of the ones in the movie, The Mummy, so that's what I imagined whenever the scenes came up with Gladys and her kicking sand monster butt.

Great story. Nice plot, lovely characters, and well written in spite of some spelling mistakes. I loved the ending. Short and partly to the point - although it's easy to guess how it really ended. ;)

Great work! I loved it! :)

Absolutely, 100% love and adore this story. My eyes are absolutely furious with me, as I read it in one sitting, but it's well worth it. Good job!

NO... IT'S FINISHED. i love it! all the aciton and the romance going on and the last lines. although i originally wanted a longer epilogue. lol.

although there were some grammar and spelling mistakes.

Amazing story. Really well written with amazing characters and a kick-** story line! :D

absolutely ADORED this story! as you will notice when you see your stats... i found it today and could not put it down until done with it... it is now 1:30 am.

absolutely loved it. one thing, throughout the story there were some spelling/grammar mistakes that i think you should definitely go back and check over once you have the time... the most obvious of them being writing "i" in stead of "I" for several sentences at a time. though personally i don't understand why the "i" for an individual has to be capitalized (really, subliminal message much? "i as an individual is more important than the rest of the world, i'm capitalized and you're not), you can't argue with grammar rules!

amazing~ it's going as one of my fave's =D

AMAZING. I love your stories - they're so filled to the brim with imagination!