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| Hazelnut-Romance 2008-08-16 ch 1,  | abusei love the fluff and cliche. so don't stop! |
| roguishcharm 2008-05-19 ch 1, | abusecute, hehe. |
| d666lisa 2008-05-18 ch 1, | abuseCute story, parts of it didn't flow very well but overall it was very good :) |
| artistic dreamer 2008-05-04 ch 1, | abusei love fluffy stuff too! this was so cute! ahahah, that movie thing with the sneakers and high heels was random but i liked this, i love cliches and this was another awesome cliche! thanks for writing! |
| Jaeiyola 2008-05-04 ch 1, | abuseNo, don't stop writing cliches! Your one-shots are so cute, I can't help but smile and have my heart dance with joy. Amazing job on all of them. I can't wait for your next! |
| Written Incognito 2008-05-03 ch 1, | abuseI totally have a cousin named Aditi :) This was a cute story! It was a little predictable, but it was definitely adorable. The part where he faints is so amusing! I'd be scared to death that he hated me or something... haha. anyway, good write! |
| Lily Llynn 2008-05-02 ch 1, | abuseLOL I love fluffy stuff too, so feel free to keep writing it since you do it so well. (: I kinda wish the ending was a bit different, but as long as they're together I don't mind. XD Hehehe. Ooh this feels good since I haven't done it in awhile. (You're probably confused, aren't you?) I finally get to add a oneshot to my c2 again! Yay! (I wasn't doing it before since I hadn't reviewed all the ones already added by staff.) So yes, if you hadn't already figured it out, I'm adding this to my c2. (: |
| x3life 2008-04-24 ch 1, | abuseaw this was so cute!! |
| SparklingStar25 2008-04-04 ch 1, | abuselovely! |
| starlit x sky 2008-04-02 ch 1, | abuseAww! That was awesome. OK, since, I say 'cute' too much, I thought I'd say 'awesome' instead, because this story IS awesome! P.S. It was cute too. =P |
| xLittleBlackConverse. 2008-03-22 ch 1, | abuseheyy i really liked your oneshot.. it was well fluffy and all :) I couldn't help noticing that your name is Aditi..so you're Indian huh? Lol sorry if that was too..i dont know :) |
| ()()() 2008-03-22 ch 1, anon. | abuseI have nothing to say anymore. How about - I LOVE IT! Its AWESOME! |
| animefreakgirl 2008-03-21 ch 1, | abuseAwesome One-shot. It'll be great if you put this one-shot as a story but who knows. It's so awesome what Adrian did though. |
| found.eventually 2008-03-21 ch 1, | abuseI shall not say aw. I shall not say aw. I shall not say aw. Hahaha. But that was SO adorable! I mean, yeah it's cliched and crap, but oh who gives a damn when you get GOOD cliches? :) |
| moshpitqueen017 2008-03-20 ch 1, | abuseokay, that was basically the sweetest thing ever. :D but i admit, i adore crazy nutcases like adrian. haha. good job! |