Reviews for Check My Vital Signs

perpetual questions 2008-04-20 ch 1,	abuseIntense, strong. great haiku. ~adrian~
Faith Adeline 2008-03-20 ch 1,	abusewow, I like it. It's so strong even though it's so short. Great job :) Faith
Ygg 2008-03-20 ch 1,	abuseGreat beating.. great emotions.. great poem!
painted.music 2008-03-20 ch 1,	abusekonnichi wa I know the feeling. Well, it never happened to me personally, thank God; but one of the first stories I ever wrote was about a boy whose mother died. And I described him feeling like that. Ha det -Shan- P.S: Brill, of course. grin
eville 2008-03-20 ch 1,	abuselove it. =] x
mickey160 2008-03-20 ch 1,	abuseyou should make it longer. but your choice of words is good.