Intense, strong. great haiku.
~adrian~

wow, I like it. It's so strong even though it's so short. Great job :)
Faith

Great beating.. great emotions.. great poem!

konnichi wa

I know the feeling. Well, it never happened to me personally, thank God; but one of the first stories I ever wrote was about a boy whose mother died. And I described him feeling like that.

Ha det
-Shan-

P.S: Brill, of course. *grin*

love it. =]
x

you should make it longer. but your choice of words is good.