Reviews for The Chronicles of J and T

Reviews For: The Chronicles of J and T

dreamercrys 2008-06-09 ch 18,	abuseInteresting...I love it.
PoorEnglishArtist 2008-04-25 ch 15,	abuseI resemble that remark = i resent that remark, methinks! Just make it longer! Less dialogue - it's good, there's just a couple of times when it's not quite 'natural' enough. :D More description - and make it goodm useful stuff, not just a quick sentence sprawled on the page ;) aye!?
PoorEnglishArtist 2008-04-25 ch 1,	abuseHeya! Just thought I'd review this! Just a little more info on the characters...you know, make the reader like them a little more...and some descriptions. Yep, that would totally make this story! It's really cute how it is (dunno why I'm reviewing from chapter one but hey, this is me) at the moment, but to add a little more 'reality' to it, people, place and emotion descriptions would be excellent. Keep writing!
J. M. Dusk 2008-04-16 ch 12,	abuseyou are amazing! i love your writing! makes me happy. =] i love the feeling of mystery you get after reading that last chapter. keeps me wondering so keep updating so i don't have to wonder forever!
M.J. Dawn 2008-04-11 ch 8,	abuseAw this is such a cute story! lol More soon please! --Marie Jane
J. M. Dusk 2008-03-22 ch 5,	abusehaha funny funny stuff! i love the whole kicking him thing great =] i love how fast you update i'm still working on the next chapter of fighting temptation but hopefully it will be done soon xoxo jay em
J. M. Dusk 2008-03-22 ch 3,	abuseme likey! our writing styles seem a lot alike if you know what i mean lots of detail and such my only suggestion is possibly making the chapters a bit longer is all miss you!! xo ~jay em~

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