wow, your writing always blows me away.

Loved it
:)

OMG, just realised while reading all the mail I hadn't opened, that I hadn't noticed you'd posted this! Now that I think about it, I think it was mentioned in a conversation, but you know me, short-attention-span girl, it flew right out my brain after only a few seconds.

So here I am, reading, enjoying, and reviewing. I'm just a little late. ^^

I don't think it's bad at all, I like it! It's very different from what you usually write, and it sounds more like prose than poetry, like Amber said, but it's very good all the same! I like the last part,

"I am offering you a chance
to sing with the skies,
to laugh with the roaring seas
and to sleep weightless
in the arms
of a summer breeze"

Poetic, and beautiful.

All in all, great job!^^

woo. you changed the title ;D

I like this piece. I feel it's optimistic and "challenging" - (so lacking in poetry, normally, it seems)

This sounds more like prose than poetry, but that's ok because it's still a good piece. Nice job!