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| Moon-Chaser 2008-03-21 ch 1, | abuseI like the description that you use. The way you bring it all together and how you put the last line in. keep it up. |
| me. moi. ich. 2008-03-20 ch 1, | abusei like how the last line doesnt fit the rhyme scheme- good job |