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Reviews For: Dead End Hallways

Moon-Chaser
2008-03-21
ch 1,
abuseI like the description that you use. The way you bring it all together and how you put the last line in.

keep it up.
me. moi. ich.
2008-03-20
ch 1,
abusei like how the last line doesnt fit the rhyme scheme- good job
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