-too lazy to log in like this story when you gonna finish the other one huh?

A nice start!

I'd like more details, though. What's the setting like? I don't think you ever elaborated on that, as well as where he found the girl. Was she all alone in a classroom? Either way, wouldn't the teacher or someone nearby have heard her screams? And it seemed to take him hardly any effort to knock her unconscious.

Just a few things I was wondering about.