The first stanza is pretty raw with emotions, but I feel that it's constrained by your diction. Your attempt at forcing the piece to rhyme took away some of the passion within the poem itself. However, it seems as if you've written this with explicit conduct and who am I to judge the feelings felt? I thank you for the enjoyable read.

arcane

Pretty intense.

I like the narration/tone/mood (or whatever else you might call it). It's angsty, to say the least, but I also like how it blames this outside person. The lines are flung with anger, and some of the wording you used is sharp and bitter ('When you stripped it all off and it all just rotted away').

Anyway, nice work here. =P