i would feel guilty also. but then again. they had a chance to get together and she didn't take it. so this is just mother nature's way of telling her that she has to risk it this time or else she'll lose him.

I don't understand the concept. Does the plot work backwards? Or how do you start with them at his wedding day and then end up with them together? It's very confusing to follow.

Cute story :)
I didn't exactly understand the plot and the scenes were a bit confusing, but it made me smile.

Very nicely done!

Aww..this was really good. I loved it!

interesting

This was really good! I don't totally get what time frame the middle part came in, but otherwise I really enjoyed it. Good job! :)

Aw, SO CUTE! I was nearly crying in the beginning, but then, yay!

loved it :D

Very Creative! The beginning got me, it reeled me in...I have a thing for angst-ridden, tortured first love. It's great!

Omg! I was so relieved when I realised that the beginning was just her vision. Phew! No, I don't think it is all that selfish because if she hadn't confessed her feelings to Owen, the both of them were going to be hurt for the rest of their lives and it was going to be agony. At least Candace is at the beginning of the relationship with Owen and she can move on real quick.

Congrats on a job well done!

gulistanlik

I loved, loved, loved this story! It was so creatively done. I've never been into the whole supernatural stuff, leaning more into the realistic pieces, but I've always been partial to the concept of admitting your feelings during a wedding. And when you did reveal the supernatural part, for some reason, it just seemed to work. I could really believe that happening, perhaps because this was so well-written. And I could definitely relate to Sophie's fear. This is going into my favorites right now. =)

Cute :D Loved it!
-Aria

omg i totally didnt get the vision at first, like i thought it was real... until the way end... I was like oh =)
but it was really cute, and totally talks about her subconscience, like the pros and cons to everything

Whoa. Out of this world. Literally. XD
I do like the supernatural concept, it's creative and it works here. I feel a bit sorry for Candace. :P Poor girl.
Creative plot and characters, excellent writing, fantastic oneshot. Love it. (: I'm glad found.eventually suggested it to me and now I'm going to add it to my c2. (: