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| manutdmad 2008-06-21 ch 1, anon. | abuseloved it :D |
| TheGeekGirl 2008-05-28 ch 1,  | abuseVery Creative! The beginning got me, it reeled me in...I have a thing for angst-ridden, tortured first love. It's great! |
| gulistanlik 2008-05-10 ch 1, | abuseOmg! I was so relieved when I realised that the beginning was just her vision. Phew! No, I don't think it is all that selfish because if she hadn't confessed her feelings to Owen, the both of them were going to be hurt for the rest of their lives and it was going to be agony. At least Candace is at the beginning of the relationship with Owen and she can move on real quick. Congrats on a job well done! gulistanlik |
| Incurable Dreamer 2008-05-08 ch 1, | abuseI loved, loved, loved this story! It was so creatively done. I've never been into the whole supernatural stuff, leaning more into the realistic pieces, but I've always been partial to the concept of admitting your feelings during a wedding. And when you did reveal the supernatural part, for some reason, it just seemed to work. I could really believe that happening, perhaps because this was so well-written. And I could definitely relate to Sophie's fear. This is going into my favorites right now. =) |
| White Rose Blossom 2008-05-08 ch 1, | abuseCute :D Loved it! -Aria |
| x3life 2008-05-07 ch 1, | abuseomg i totally didnt get the vision at first, like i thought it was real... until the way end... I was like oh =) but it was really cute, and totally talks about her subconscience, like the pros and cons to everything |
| Lily Llynn 2008-05-07 ch 1, | abuseWhoa. Out of this world. Literally. XD I do like the supernatural concept, it's creative and it works here. I feel a bit sorry for Candace. :P Poor girl. Creative plot and characters, excellent writing, fantastic oneshot. Love it. (: I'm glad found.eventually suggested it to me and now I'm going to add it to my c2. (: |
| Lady E 2008-03-31 ch 1, | abuseI could just imagine Owen in trying to comfort her at the end saying weakly, "Don't be silly. It's not like you told me on my wedding day!" XD An interesting idea, very romantic. |
| X-Romantic-X 2008-03-27 ch 1, | abuseWo! My name is Sophie too :D. I absolutely LOVED that, at first I didn't get it but then Owen mentioned visions I got it lol. It was amazing!! |
| LiMay 2008-03-24 ch 1, | abusereally great one! =) the starting was SO sad! =) glad it ended this way. |
| found.eventually 2008-03-21 ch 1, | abuseI feel bad for Candice, actually. I mean, some psychic just saw her marrying a guy that she loves, so she took him away from the picture. How about Candice? I mean... Aw, I just feel really bad for her. But on the other hand, I feel so happy for Owen and Soph! (yeah, as you can see, this is the perfect example of contradicting emotions.) Gasp. I really really liked it! :) |
| simplicity is complex 2008-03-20 ch 1, | abuseAH |
| candid 2008-03-20 ch 1, | abuseThis was really good, and the vision thing was definitely different. My one criticism is that it should have been explained earlier on so it doesn't seem like such a deus ex machina, but since this is a one shot I'm probably just being picky. Bien hecho! xCandid |
| EoSpHoRuS 2008-03-20 ch 1, | abuseAw! That was really cute. I think I loved everything about it, but I was really scared at the beginning that they weren't going to be together! Now I'm glad I finished it. Great Job. Loved it. ~EoSpHoRuS |
| Faith Adeline 2008-03-20 ch 1, | abuseAw, I really liked this. It was a cute one shot. Keep it up and update soon! Faith |