|Reviews for No|
| Kefrith 7/14/08 . chapter 1
This is really great! I really like how you convey your message in more ways than just with the words themselves (emphasized letters, metaphors). You are a great writer, so keep it up!
| dancewhennobodyiswatching 3/23/08 . chapter 1
i LOVE IT
absolutely, positively love it
it flows so well,
| vaudeville summers 3/20/08 . chapter 1
Nice job with the "answer" part and your language is simply fantastic. This piece could be such a moving song, as well. When I read it, the emotions and messages practically cry out at me and I love it. This is exactly the sort of thing I aspire to write. Thank you.
"Sinking dejectedly, into a lonely recess by the stomach...I meant to say yes." My God, I love those lines.
I tried to find constructive criticism, but I can't really find any. The only line I don't really like is "Coming right now" because the repetition is a bit unnecessary, I think. Other than that, wonderful job.