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| Countess Sasha the Weird 2008-04-09 ch 2,  | abuseThis is such the interest catcher! I didn't think it was abrupt at all, it just made the cliffhanger even better! Please continue! |
| Ratava100d 2008-04-03 ch 2, | abuseur really gd at makin ryming things. plz update it soon |
| darling81 2008-03-31 ch 2, | abuseI really enjoyed your prologue, I hope this story turn out as you hope, it's a really great idea. Have you thought about maybe using a villanelle as well? I think it could be effective...just an idea :) -darling81 |
| LaCharlatan 2008-03-26 ch 1, | abuseA very ambitious goal you've put ahead of you! I'll be cheering you on! It's really good so far--grabbed my attention. Can't wait to see what you do next! |
| Ratava100d 2008-03-21 ch 1, | abuseim really rubbish at making things ryme especially long things! Well done! |
| Jeanie Gordon 2008-03-20 ch 1, | abuseI like this idea a lot. And I love the main character's name. I hope this story develops well. I'll be keeping track of it. :D You rock. |
| Countess Sasha the Weird 2008-03-20 ch 1, | abuseOh! That's so beautiful! I've tried my hand at poetry, but found I should stick to non-verse stories:). Please continue! |