kinda short, but good.

She forgot all her stuff in the house, though, right? Nice story so far. It is going to be continued, right?

Awesome chapter, I wonder who that creepy girl was! Update soon, I can't wait to find out what happens next!

Wow! This is really good. I'm so excited to read more!

All righty! You posted. It doesn't look like there are any mistakes to me.

She went in the house! I wonder what's gonna happen in there, update soon!

really good, so far, wonder what's going to happen in the old creepy house, will she make it to school on Monday?

Hmm, interesting

This is well-written and in good shape except for one spelling mistake. While it's paced well and flows along nicely, it's a little uneventful. I'm suspecting there will be something surprising in the next chapter though, especially since this is labeled horror. If that is the case, you have done a very good job portraying a normal school day for contrast. :D

Awesome story, I wonder what's going to happen next! Update soon!

You know I've actually forgotten my password and stuff now, but yeah poor little Kay-lin *pat's made up person's head*

Good job! I really liked how you made the protaganist so relatable and real right off the bat. Only thing is that when you said: “Oh, that great of a day then? Or was the rest better?” Kay groaned, that was all the answer she needed to give. “Ouch. Sorry.” it was kind of confusing.

~Keep writing!~

Good start, I can't wait to read more!