 Esther Jade 2008-04-12 . chapter 1Review game!
I like the concept of this poem and its delivery. Yes, it's something a lot of people probably talk about but the title and opening pull together a very tight way of expressing it. That tight delivery continues throughout and I really like the clarity and "punchiness" of the poem.
One thing I didn't quite get was what "the shitty concept" was. It seemed to be the only vague part of a very clear poem. This could be because I'm not American but it did feel a bit vague to me. |