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| Esther Jade 2008-04-12 ch 1, | abuseReview game! I like the concept of this poem and its delivery. Yes, it's something a lot of people probably talk about but the title and opening pull together a very tight way of expressing it. That tight delivery continues throughout and I really like the clarity and "punchiness" of the poem. One thing I didn't quite get was what "the shitty concept" was. It seemed to be the only vague part of a very clear poem. This could be because I'm not American but it did feel a bit vague to me. |
| crazeedaizee411 2008-04-09 ch 1, | abuseYou have no idea what you're writing about. George Bush 1 did a Great job as pres. #2 was the only one who was a little messed up(and it was all backed by good intentions) At least they didn't dodge the draft(Unlike Bill Clinton.) |
| simpleplan13 2008-03-22 ch 1, | abuseI like this... it's short and funny and sadly very true. |