omg, that was so sweet!

I don't know why... but I like the sadder version better.

Great story!

i loved the alternate ending. its a little unrealistic but sweet nonetheless.

I absolutely love the alternate ending. It gives a whole different perspective, almost saying that you have to get the full story before you judge. It's a perfect reflection of my life right now. =]

i'm glad they ended up together. its really good! i actually cried. =)

Oh wow, that was beautiful. You write one-shots so well. That was beautiful...I said that already, didn't I? :) Great job.

Hey there~
Nice oneshot. Very bittersweet (love that ;)) You could expand it so that it becomes longer but still, great job! (and I feel so bad for you giving me so many reviews and me not giving you one but you really deserved it)
Luv,
d.k

aw,so cute:)
(crys) juhi is so proud of u:)
haha,jkz jkz but that was a really good story

Your really talented!! I really like all those one-shots of yours!
Grtz Silencia

AW! That is such a cute ending!
Very well written, with a lot of emotion
~Lillie

Aww this was a good ending. It feels a bit rushed but it was good I guess.

WOW! That is really good, really well written, almost as if in a trance. It has such a hypnotic feel to it.
Teehee. Keep on writing!
~Lillie

good ending.

please...don't finish thestory in one chapter

Lol good. Anyway, it would really help the story if you make it much longer. It's okay but it could be better if you make it longer in my opinion so..yea. Update soon!