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| Imalefty 2008-05-24 ch 1,  | abusestraight from the review marathon! (link in profile) THIS IS AMAZING! ahahaha, this is so funny, i was laughing so hard. XD the first commentary on harding was so funny. buchanan was pretty spot on. hamilton wasn't a president, but that's okay - his fling with maria reynolds was pretty epic. XD (i love hamilton, by the way, so i would know. XD) but seriously, you had to include that maria and her husband bribed hamilton for a long time... and hamilton kept giving them money so that he could keep sleeping with maria... XD it was pretty twisted. why did you skip clinton? O.o? come ON. he got impeached for that. (well for lying under oath, but still.) anyway. yes, i love america, too. for real. good job with this. :) keep writing! -Lefty |
| Marajohuiki 2008-03-28 ch 1, | abuseCertainly it made me laugh, and the beginning was very well written, but it began to deteriorate nearing the end. Perhaps you can speak a little less informally and keep the reader interested. You've got a fun story going, though. |