This poem is SO erotic! It was so bold and brash, I love it! Passion seethes from every word, desire grows hungrier with every line! This was amazing, keep writing!

Intense in this one. Love it!


XKristie MarieX

intense

it's a sexy "stuff" I mean, I can find passion in this

well, it's short but i really like how you made it. the whole style is what i'm saying i like. yay! for you!
~RaVeN-naILs

I like the rhyming and how it's all just little thing and the ending explains their relation. It's really great that youre writing again!