Reviews for HAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA first kiss

Imalefty 2008-05-25 ch 1,	abusestraight from the review marathon! (link in profile) i liked the way you build tension with each line. :) it was almost poetic. though i wonder why you made every other line bold and italic... i didn't quite see the point of that. i don't like your title... it just doesn't fit the piece at all. what's the HA about? O.o? keep writing! -Lefty
Johannas mirror 2008-03-21 ch 1,	abusei like this, but im not sure why