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Reviews For: Label Me A Cliché

Lilium amoenum
2008-03-22
ch 1,
abuseSome clichés deserve to be communicated again and again and again… especially if they are presented in such a beautiful form. Good job!
Ygg
2008-03-22
ch 1,
abuseHaha love the title :-) It may well be cliché, but that doesn't mean they should not be told again, to remind us that they're true. And don't worry about the syllable count.. What's more "worrying" is that you have to mention it (same thing I also always do whenever syllable count doesn't fit), because otherwise it often becomes the one thing reviewers notice and write about in their comments.. as if a syllable count is more important than content.
britishslang
2008-03-21
ch 1,
abuseYou took a cliche and made it simple and meaningful.
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