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CinderpoolANDMoonfire
2008-06-08
ch 1,
abuseI prefere rambles over Essays. Rambles are...ramblish/ I like that and I'm too lazy to ramble about rambling. I think I just did it? Did I ramble? If I didn't ramble then what am I typeing? I have no idea. Now, youre not getting anymore rambles you here me? Then what am I going to type? Maybe I should type nothing? Thats a great idea!
P.S The reason the cafrtearia food is horrible, is because it is shipped from the bottom of owgybogy lake in the land of 3.14! Which is ruled by a dictator(a.k.a Cinderpool). In the lake there lives a giant pie that eats poop, then poops out that. A.K.A Cafetearia food. Its a bit unacurate, but who cares?
Zodian
2008-03-25
ch 1,
abuseThat was a good non-fiction. I'm not sure where you live, but its similar in Canada. Our government basically gives each municipality in Ontario the power to generally make the rules for themselves and however they like it (i.e take away/add holidays, weird rules), so long as the changes don't violate the law.

I really don't see how they expect people to stop being human beings just because of their profession, whether it be as a member of the school board, principal, or teacher.

Why Good Friday? Someone higher up in the chain probably needed/wanted Tuesday off.

Why does the cafeteria food taste bad? Its cheap, and you could probably find cattle feeds of higher quality than the stuff they give kids these days. At my school they charge almost 5$ for a poutine, which is almost double the price it was two years ago, at half the size; & they call it a 'large'.

Sorry, I'll stop using the review to rant at you. I really liked this submission, it really encourages the reader to evluate the actions of the school system.

If you were in the police force or any other social service, I highly doubt the government would shuffle your holidays and tell you to suck it up if you complained.

I though the submission was very well written.
Keep up the excellent work!
Laniatus
2008-03-22
ch 1,
abuse8D; lawl, hey there, Missy. I'm dumb and forgot I have a FPc profile.

Anyway, I laughed. >3 It was good, a couple grammar issues, but I have those all the time. It was a little sardonic. Very true. 8P

So yeah. Lame review, but eh. XD
concerto49
2008-03-22
ch 1,
abuseRather unfortunate. Well it's a public holiday where I live so the school can't argue about that. Even adults have to be off, yeah!

Oh well. Cheers.
Zonne
2008-03-21
ch 1,
abuseI think that was pretty funny, and, somewhat ironic. Esp the photographer part. Why is that? or I should say - Why does that figure?

Anyway, one little grammar gripe...

teachers loose a free day

loose should be lose...
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