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shell
2008-03-22
ch 1, anon.
abuse^ way to be perceptive stupidhead ^
Arn
2008-03-22
ch 1,
abuseapples get pregnant? O_o Well i'd sure hate to make one of them pregnant. Unless they're going to pop out something , like a new apple, or just split into two and drop all its seeds, i don't think they would be considered that. butterfly wings? You actually killed butterflies and stole their wings? What kind of evil person are you. I liked how you compared seeds to teardrops, though. The apple's probably sad you ate all of it so it cries inside. haha
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