Reviews for Bring In the Clowns

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Green Eyed Angel 2008-08-19 ch 1,	abuseJade is too dense to be true? I -cough- am probably denser than her, so i guess you're wrong. Still, great story. Though I did figure out that Tan was Nataniel in the end. Maybe I'm not THAT dense? Who cares. Great story!
Hyperroll 2008-06-29 ch 1,	abuseadorable and original. i also enjoyed the narrator. Jade spoke as if speaking to a friend.. i like how it wasn't formal narrating. anyway, great job darling
Sydney-J 14 2008-05-15 ch 1,	abuselove this peepoo poopee are awesome n funny kids nick names jade is very dense but that just makes it better
gulistanlik 2008-05-10 ch 1,	abuseSQUEE This was absolutely AWESOME! I loved every bit of it. So sweet! hehe. You have yet to fail to amaze me. =D Nataniel sounds like quite a dish. And I guess you really can't be too young to fall in love. Well, to realise that it's the real thing, I think you'd have to be older. But to actually fall in love, I guess there really isn't an age. Keep up the good work! gulistanlik
HoesOverBros 2008-05-08 ch 1,	abusewow, i'm speechless. really, i just love it. i know that you asked for constructive criticism, but i can't think of a thing to say :D maybe that i want it to continue :(:( no, it's really perfect and sweet and nice and just good to read :D it's just ... awesome :D:D
Lily Llynn 2008-04-15 ch 1,	abuseI'll agree Jade is too dense, and she's not my favorite character in the world, but she is entertaining. (: I like the whole clown and NaTANiel thing (I figured that out, hehe), and this was still a good oneshot, though I agree not your best. (: (Oh and yes, I will continue reviewing all your oneshots because apparently my staff liked them so much they added them all. Haha.) So yes, I'm still glad Queen of Absolutely Everything added this to our c2. (:
atreyu love 2008-04-13 ch 1,	abuseim actually just going to read al your stories :D
Blue Bird Cry 2008-04-03 ch 1,	abuseI still thought it was cute!! Rather unrealistic, but very cute. She's not that dense. Cue nervous fidgeting One of my best friends likes me and he would talk to me... about myself. I would constantly interrogate him about 'Miss. Perfect' as well as egg him on to ask her out and to bash 'Miss Perfect's' crush. So, about two weeks ago, he said he needed to get something off his chest before his HSC exams... and he told me he likes me. He's liked me since fifth grade, and I NEVER knew. :S Does that make me... dense? :S Sorry I just clogged up your review box with unrelated nonsense. I guess you'll be needing a plunger now, eh? Anyways... I found that very humorous and it was actually well written. You really do seem to have a knack for these one-shots. Where do you draw your inspiration from?? Haha. What a cliche question!!
Oooh.Look.A Cat 2008-03-30 ch 1,	abuseurgh i totally understand when you say there is too many parties there's way too many in this little country plus the amount of parties that my parents throw just for the hell of it that pisses me off too and i HAVE to look nice?! gr anyways cute one shot so adorable when it was revealed that the clown's name was TAN i was like WTF?! what kinda name is that?! but then the next time nataniel was written i was like GASP! its him! lol it was sad on my part dense on jade's part a little weird with the whole kissing ashley under the mistletoe thing, though hilarious but all round absolutely adorable! izzie
Pinkamoo 2008-03-30 ch 1,	abuseAw, really good job there! Totally changed my view on clowns, I hope I find one with pretty grey eyes and messy brown hair! -sigh- If only!
Cupid's Jinx 2008-03-28 ch 1,	abuseMnaw! Adorafluff! -x-
EnChAnTeD-KoReAn 2008-03-26 ch 1,	abusei like your original way at your one-shot! i mean, it was definately a cliched ending w/ happy ending sealed w/ a kiss, but good job!
SparklingStar25 2008-03-26 ch 1,	abusereally cute!
misery sister 2008-03-25 ch 1,	abuseGreat story so far! Keep it up! :D
katie valentine 2008-03-25 ch 1,	abuseperfect. :D

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