Very deep and I look forward to her progression. A bit confusing, but very mysterious.

Keep it up!

“Something said that bothered her. Something said that she is now thinking about. Something said that she wonders how the person could say it with no remorse.
Without feeling sorry.”
The person must not be remorseful.
“Wondering why on certain things. Never getting an answer.”

Because they don’t know the answers themselves and they don’t want to admit that either, because they don’t want you to know they are weak, and covers it up with, “I won’t tell you the answer,” or “I won’t tell you, you don’t need to know.”

You can’t use your own at a troubled time is because you aren’t thinking properly. It’s not stupid, it’s just that you aren’t really thinking. You are panicing, and asking yourself over and over again, “What can I do? What can I do?” You are not really finding a solution.

Hello April
Maybe it’s the fact that there is nothing to say?

Yes, It’s good to know who you are, and the best way to do that is to find your moral standings and values. Find your preferences, likes and dislikes from there. Realize how you think and why. Then move on to making good choices by making judgements on what you value.

Hi! It's me again!
In this chapter... I could really understand the girl..I've been through things like this except for the boys' part and it's just this year that my dad would actually ask how my studies are going... To my friends, even though I hold some anger towards some of them I couldn't help but feel concerned about them... I really liked this story/fic of yours.

I think I'll read all of your stories during our Christmas break.

Keep on writting! So far there are only two entries of yours that I've read... But they were good ones! I'm looking forward to reading all of them!

-Love.U

Kindred spirits but for the fact that I can't even give advice, I'm so screwed up.

I'm pretty sure you mean protain instead of protein. (but I'm not a good speller so I could be wrong.) I loved this the doubting of your own advice. I'm a person who does that too. I think I'm too stupid to take my own advice. I loved the line "Why can't she ever take her own advice?" wonderful!

vividly desriptive. way to express emotions. I can feel what this girl feels!

This is very powererful and really emotive. Good work with this :)

I think it's wonderful. I have alot of the same feelings specially the aspect of needing someone. You put lots of emotions into your writting. That's excellent. keep writting.