Reviews for The Legend of the Seven

Reviews For: The Legend of the Seven

Alexiana 2008-05-06 ch 6,	abuseWhen I first saw the length of this chapter I was like, "NO!"... but then I read it, lol. I really liked the side story. I think it adds depth to the characters and a new dimension to the story. If I wasn't already curious about where the story was going, I definitely am now. Anyway, take your time getting to my stuff. I read and review for my own pleasure not to coerce people into reading mine. I'd like your opinion because I like the way you write, that's it. Anyway, I hope you're well (or will be soon!) Tchuss.
Alexiana 2008-05-04 ch 5,	abuseYay, another chapter! The fun is starting and the plot is thickening. They're going to see a dead man, eh? Interesting. I think it also says a lot about the people that they're up against that they'd go for a young lady. I'm curious who you make them out to be once we get to 'know' them. On another note, I must admit that I was disappointed that Long Ear gave up his info so easily. If the legend has been a legend so long you'd think he would hold his tongue until he died, but these are your characters and I'm sure that you have plans with them so I won't fret too much :D LOL, anyway, fun chapter..good insights...
Alexiana 2008-04-04 ch 4,	abuseBefore I begin my review... first sentence you're missing a word. I think you meant a lock of hair... Anyway, back to the important stuff...Tiffany Reyes seems interesting and I'm curious to see how she fits into this. By your descriptions I'm envisioning a jumpy nerd of a girl... it'd be cool if you'd somehow mention somewhere if she was taken to wearing skirts or pants because I think that would tie in what direction you're taking the character. Anyway, can't wait to see where this is going.
Alexiana 2008-04-03 ch 3,	abuseO, is the watcher who they seek? I found this chapter a bit harder to follow though. Maybe because you just from Alan to Hank in the blink of an eye or your dialogue between two people is held within one paragraph. I'm not sure.. I'll try to put my finger on it in the next chapter.
Alexiana 2008-04-03 ch 2,	abuse...And the plot thickens. Good adjective use, by the way. It's nice to read something where the writer has a decent vocabulary.
Alexiana 2008-04-03 ch 1,	abuseYou have me hooked on the first chapter and that is so hard to do. Not only to you have great imagery, but just enough dialogue to give personalities. I'm off to the next chapter (so cool)!
Kingdom Come 2008-03-23 ch 1,	abuseAwesome work on setting the scene. I felt as if I was there as soon as the watchman came into the story. The way you wrote the story, as in the dialogue and descriptions, really suited the story well. Despite a few grammer errors ( and I be a hypocrite for pointing those out ), the story read very well. It has a real enchanting feel about it.

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