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Reviews For: Isn't That Right?

simpleplan13
2008-03-22
ch 1,
abuseThough it all... through

I like this. Starting off with the statements and the questions were really interesting. The idea of painting a smile is kinda cliched, but the forcing it to reach your eyes was a really nice twist.
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