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| Princess-anna57 2008-03-26 ch 1,  | abuse*clap clap clap* awesomely written. Very good rhyming. :) Review battle!! ~Anna~ ^_^ |
| Sweet Lemon Effect 2008-03-22 ch 1, | abuseWow. Excellent. It gave me a very clear picture of the scene, it rhymed, the syllables matched up closely, I am impressed. |
| Lurid Black 2008-03-22 ch 1, | abuseHehe I don't know why, but I like the line: 'She was arguing with my step dad tom' Sweet structure, and good rhymes, write on. |