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Naomi Chick 2009-11-12 . chapter 17
Great chapter and cute ending.
LollylopMAR 2009-11-10 . chapter 1
Nice story. However it might be better to show the readers slowly the inner character of your characters rather than just coming out and stating stuff. Don't worry i have that problem that line just now was an indirect quote of my friend/editor. I cant wait to read more, I am a sucker for human shaped beings with wings.

PS please read and review my story The Longest Time Away, I think you will like it, later in the parts I haven't written yet the main character gets wings too. You don't have to read it if you don't want too thou.
Kayla Brown 2009-07-03 . chapter 15
Cool. I love Angel Wings (A.W.)
It's such a wonderful story thus far.
Well, I'm going to read 1001 wishes now.
And don't ever apologize to me for something as little as asking me to read a certain story.
Well, have a wonderful time.
Love
KAYLA BROWN
anaa-pixie 2009-04-02 . chapter 15
haha haha
i love it
your fan!
~anaa
anaa-pixie 2009-04-01 . chapter 2
ha ha lovin the stories dude!
Frail.Wings.Of.Vanity 2009-03-30 . chapter 15
For some reason I can't remember Sakura's dark side. Oh well. Probably just cuz I haven't red it for a while.

And while we're on that topic, it's about time! How long has it been?

Anyways, had me fooled! I thought for sure Akera was the evil one. /shrugs.
Oh well, good job!
Sebastian Osprey 2008-10-04 . chapter 14
No--! Wait--what? Wait--no! No no no! The demon isn't Daisuke or Akera, is it?
Osprey
Naomi Chick 2008-10-01 . chapter 14
Once again, great chapter. I really like the song in the chapter.
Frail.Wings.Of.Vanity. 2008-10-01 . chapter 14
oh, oh! i've heard that song beeforee!! xD
uh oh! Mighty's a' comin for ya sakura!
good job!
to lazy to log in.
Aneomon 2008-09-01 . chapter 13
Not half bad, this has potential, especially from what I've seen. However, I'd be nice if the chapterw were a little longer, they take me a couple minutes at most to read. And, I'd like to go back to Sakura's brothers, backtrack a bit, maybe introduce more of her history somehow, or maybe Jesse's. Either way, I'll be sure to keep reading. Have fun in Turkey!
Sebastian Osprey 2008-07-13 . chapter 13
(Sorry I haven't reviewed this in so long.)
That was startling! He kissed her! Oh, my goodness, have you created a Wickham character?
Osprey
Frail.Wings.Of.Vanity 2008-07-13 . chapter 13
mikayla here, just to lazy to sign in.
anywho, hahaha! i like this chap best
jesse's all mad! XD
anyway,i should be able to finish the chap today after i finish vacuuming! :p
great chapter!
Ratava100d 2008-07-13 . chapter 13
he will be punished.
i still dont like Akera.
he must be EVIL.
thanx for updating.
please update soon.
Naomi Chick 2008-07-12 . chapter 13
Great chapter. Ooh Jesse doesn't look to happy about the kiss.
Microsuede Mouse 2008-07-12 . chapter 13
Hehe aww, poor Jesse! Good job Silencia, your writing's getting better every time!
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