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| Plej 2008-08-14 ch 4,  | abuseThis was a really cool story, it was a fun and quick read and all that groovy stuff. Although it is your romantic flic type of plot, you still made it unique and what not... Yeah, I enjoyed it. Uh ... ok. Ja ne! |
| RoseLife 2008-07-23 ch 4, | abuseLOL very cuute the story line was unique loved the last little bit at the end ^.^ well done! |
| Beyond-the-Shadows 2008-07-14 ch 4, | abuseHaha cute, I liked it- specially when Rob came back with the hancuffs lol |
| Queen of Laughs 2008-07-11 ch 4, | abusecute! wish there was more! :D |
| Katherine-the-greate 2008-07-08 ch 2, | abusegreat work again. I felt sorry for her low self esteem. you did an amazing job, though |
| Katherine-the-greate 2008-07-08 ch 1, | abusewow. that was a fun chapter. nice work. It was a really fun read. |
| Gentle. Edge. 2008-07-02 ch 4, | abuseI wasn't crazy about how you randomly switched POVs or how quickly their relationship went but I think it was fairly good. Once again, nice job :) |
| Gentle. Edge. 2008-07-02 ch 1, | abuseI can tell Rob really cares for his brother and that Agatha (interesting name, btw) is a pretty good person. I can't wait to read the rest of the story. Nice job :) |
| Somebody To Love 08 2008-06-30 ch 4, | abuseGreat story, I liked it very much. The only problem is I want more. Agatha is very easy to relate to. You did a good job with that in the short time span which the story took place within. I give it a thumbs up. |
| x3life 2008-05-19 ch 4, | abuseaw this was really cute!! =) |
| Tears of My Heart 2008-05-12 ch 4, | abuseGreat story =) It made me laugh and ... well, hide my face everytime he came up behind her and heard something embarrassing! I really liked it. |
| Theti 2008-05-10 ch 4, | abuseU NEED TO UPDATE!! i love rob he's so cute! |
| XxAmanda Is A Jasper's Girl... 2008-05-10 ch 4, | abusegreat story. this chapter doesn't seem to be a great ending, though the story itself is really good. I liked it. |
| Acta Sanctorum 2008-05-02 ch 4, | abuseHaha I thought it was going to be four chapters due to the fact that you put 'fourshot'. Not knowing fictionpress terms apparently. Another chapter leaving me in anticipation and no I don't know latin... i looked it up for the benifit of a unique name. :P |
| Na 2008-05-01 ch 4, anon. | abuseI thought it was a good story, but not to be a downer or nothing, but the story moved to fast at the end. Kind of anit-climatic. Anyways it was good, but too fast at the end. XD Sorry for being a downer! T0T |