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Reviews For: we were seventeen

boys kiss girls
2008-04-02
ch 1,
abusei so already reviewed this.

i remember it (as you know).

i want to go find my journals now.
she smolders
2008-03-27
ch 1,
abuseThis could perfectly describe memories I cherish with my own friends. This is endearing and honest and I love it. Take care.
recycle rhymes
2008-03-24
ch 1,
abusethat sent a chill down my spine. i can totally relate. i feel like sometimes i'm still living those days. i love the way you describe nostaglia of being a teenager. nice job!
water lily nymph
2008-03-24
ch 1,
abuseYes. Yes I do.

I love this.

A lot.

:)
Random-Idiocity
2008-03-22
ch 1,
abuseI agree, the hellogoodbye days was a neat metaphor. Good poem, Keep it Up!
sticks stones and TECHNO
2008-03-22
ch 1,
abuseThat was really good and nicely written. I like the topic, and I enjoyed reading it.
Kumquat21
2008-03-22
ch 1,
abuseLovely. I liked the 'hellogoodbye days', and the bold line was perfect. Do write more - and use capitalization!
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