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| boys kiss girls 2008-04-02 ch 1, | abusei so already reviewed this. i remember it (as you know). i want to go find my journals now. |
| she smolders 2008-03-27 ch 1, | abuseThis could perfectly describe memories I cherish with my own friends. This is endearing and honest and I love it. Take care. |
| recycle rhymes 2008-03-24 ch 1, | abusethat sent a chill down my spine. i can totally relate. i feel like sometimes i'm still living those days. i love the way you describe nostaglia of being a teenager. nice job! |
| water lily nymph 2008-03-24 ch 1, | abuseYes. Yes I do. I love this. A lot. :) |
| Random-Idiocity 2008-03-22 ch 1, | abuseI agree, the hellogoodbye days was a neat metaphor. Good poem, Keep it Up! |
| sticks stones and TECHNO 2008-03-22 ch 1, | abuseThat was really good and nicely written. I like the topic, and I enjoyed reading it. |
| Kumquat21 2008-03-22 ch 1, | abuseLovely. I liked the 'hellogoodbye days', and the bold line was perfect. Do write more - and use capitalization! |