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Iconic 2008-06-10 ch 1,	abuseIt's great! The first part really does seem like a fairy tale. The way they spoke, liek the fox did in rymes a bit. Really gives you the image of a fantasy-romance-bedtime story. I can't wait to see where you go with this, it's got great potential! Good luck!
Nonasuki-chan 2008-04-27 ch 1,	abuseWell, I think it sounds a lot like a fairytale and I've read tons of the things. I really like the way you've started this. It has a fresh feel to it, and I think that it's going to definitely be an awesome fic, if this prologue is anything to go by. ^o^
orangesandmoons 2008-04-21 ch 1,	abusewhoa..this is awsome, very interesting. I can't wait till you update it! You have a beautiful writing style, and congrats on Magebound being published!
Tiffany Lindley 2008-04-11 ch 1, anon.	abuseBeautifully done! It absolutely sounds like a fairytale. Is this the end? Please tell me there is more. I want to see the fox boy rescue his fathers pelt from the prince. Oh and in due course become the concubine then lover of said prince.
Phantos 2008-04-02 ch 1,	abuseI like! It sounded exactly like a fairytale, and then you suddenly change your writing style when Kaedes picks up the narration. (I'm assuming it's Kaedes speaking) IMHO, this is your best intro yet. I'm hooked. So, will we be seeing more of this here, or should I break down and get a livejournal?
etherealmm 2008-03-29 ch 1,	abuseOh, I can't wait to see where this story goes. I've been a fan of yours for some time. I hope you continue with this, it looks like it's going to be good!
Rumorunderoath 2008-03-28 ch 1,	abuseHmm, you did very well, i like it, and i can tell when your writing styles shift. I cant wait for the update! XD
InSilverShadows 2008-03-28 ch 1,	abuseWell, I think it's all right, agiven that you're dealing with a sort of 'red-flag' writing category. There's something a little displeasing to everyone with an ounce of maturity about giving up your writing voice to gain that ominous oracle-prophet-legendary-tale sound. I'll be honest--I'm a fan of you're writing and this is a little stale to me, as such pieces typically are, but you've got a risk to have it at the beginning of the story. If it wasn't you, I probably would have turned away from it, but I know you'll write a very good story. :)
Shirito Ano 2008-03-27 ch 1,	abuseOh yes! A new one from you! I adore your stories! and yes it definately sounded just like the old fairy tales I use to read, you did a very good job! keep it up I cant wait to read more of the story! :D
Jak Refynae 2008-03-27 ch 1,	abuseSplendid! claps hands A new story from out favorite FP author! Splendid indeed! I thought you did a good job making it sound like a fairy tale. More a folk tale really. Cant wait to read more! And don’t forget to let me know when you get more done on Magebound! And let me know as soon as you get Breach published! I want to buy the first copy with the ink still hot! :D AND I WANT ROAN AND ISHAAN PLUSHIES! MAKE AND I WILL GO ON PERILOUS QUESTING JOURNEYS TO EARN THEM! :D
Chasmodai Blue 2008-03-26 ch 1,	abuseI was reading and thinking 'oh, so cute and traditional, if not a little corn-- she died of WHAT?!' Skills, really. I like the...fairy-tale-ness of the beginning and the fact that it doesn't appear to stay that way. Poor daddy-fox. May justice be served. On a silver platter. (And after reading your profile... FELLOW OREGONIAN! internet glomp)
Amindaya 2008-03-25 ch 1,	abuseI love that the story was told like an actual fairy tale, like EXACTLY like a fairy tale, just like you'd tell it to a kid. Love it.
Bluefox-chan 2008-03-24 ch 1,	abuseOh! i like it so far. The only complaint i can come up with was that it seemed too rushed. I cant wait for more updates however, this looks like its going to be my new favorite fic. Please update soon! Bluefox
kiki 2008-03-24 ch 1, anon.	abusehey, i did read your story over at your lifejournal website. I was surprised that it showed up here. Anyway, good luck!
snarkyfox 2008-03-23 ch 1, anon.	abuseWell, until she got cancer and died, anyway. I laughed. Not that she died, but the way it sounded in my mind. ^^ I think it sounds great. I'd love to hear more! It did sound a lot like a fairytale. The, "Sweet, beautiful girl," he called, part. Thats very fairytale-ish. It's like the whole, "Little pig, little pig, let me come in.", or something. They always try again and again and use the same line in fairytales. I really did like it though. ^^

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