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| persephone in waiting 2008-06-18 ch 1,  | abuseThis poem reminds me of a friend of mine. She and her boyfriend argue sometimes, and he always backs down during the argument ... no communication, no sense of resolvement ... and worse of all, he never learns. Oversharing, I suppose. This poem is lovely, as usual. And I like the way you use commonspeech rather than typical "writing lingo." |
| smile for the sunshine 2008-03-24 ch 1, | abuselol. "where the walrus and the ** go all creepy on baby clams." that was hilarious. but again, it was real. i liked it. are you learning about astronomy in science class, too? |
| kelsi bones 2008-03-22 ch 1, | abuseI like how you relate all three things together. It gives the last stanza an even deeper meaning. =] k.X |