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| Take the Money and Run 2008-03-22 ch 1,  | abuseI really like this piece, it's hard to look at the world like you do, and do ignore things like war and see the bright side... I wouldn't change anything about this I love it! |
| FyreFly8 2008-03-22 ch 1, | abuseits nice to finally see someone in the world who can look at the bright side. but then, people like me, see the wars and political arguments so people like you can just put them out and see some good. but remember, those wars and political arguments, etc. have caused many death, so it is kind of hard to see the good in these placess. i'm doneranting now. good job! |
| Tranquil Thorns 2008-03-22 ch 1, | abuseThis is very pretty and inspiring. I try to see the world in that way, too, though with everything that goes on nowadays it's hard sometimes to do that. I really liked your beginning line and the descriptions that followed - the way you found something lovely to say about all the places you listed worldwide. Very nice. |