Reviews for Happily Ever After

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Anasa ce Fae 2008-06-09 ch 3,	abuseThis story is so clever and entertaining! I can't wait to read the rest.
Sing With The Elevator Musi... 2008-06-05 ch 3,	abusei'm really glad you're kind of breaking the cliches i mean you're playing into them as well, but we have a young fairy godmother and a smart prince. i love it. i cant wait to read the chapter about their appointment. i loved the line about the short engagement, quick marriage, and rushed honeymoon. and then she's all excited about it and thinks its SO romantic. lol that's great. again, i cant wait for more! good luck and great job!! SWEM
Sing With The Elevator Musi... 2008-06-05 ch 2,	abusehahaha i like how she changes it to LOATHE which is worse than hate. i seriously still laughing. its really good and i want to read the next chapter :) so i'll review the next one in more detail. SWEM
Sing With The Elevator Musi... 2008-06-05 ch 1,	abuseof course i love it. :) i love the whole fairy god mother with an attitude thing you've got going on. i loved the bit about how you point out the stupidness of the princes in the disney movies. cuz basically that's how they're portrayed. i love the inbreeding part too. lol sweet job. SWEM
Seisaset 2008-06-04 ch 3,	abuseoo i feel the story picking up :) please update soon
German Mickey 2008-06-04 ch 3,	abuseI love the attitude of your Fairy Godmother! She's wonderful! Poor, poor Kestrel...
German Mickey 2008-06-04 ch 2,	abuseHa ha! You said golden hair, and then blue hair for Jeanette! But I love the story!
Stockholm Syndrome 2008-06-04 ch 3,	abuseI really enjoyed your story, I kept on smiling and chuckling and ignoring the husband to read it. Ms. Faun is a wee bit stereotypical in her attempts to prove that she indeed not a stereotype, and the quips are a bit too many, but other then that, she's quite an enjoyable character. I must say, the name Kestrel? I indeed adore it. Cant wait for the rest of the story =)
Medieval-Rogue 2008-06-04 ch 3,	abuseThis story makes me chuckle, definitely. Humorous and witty, you've done a very nice job characterizing this fairy godmother, though I do hope the quips will ease up as the story progresses - sometimes it's a bit overwhelming for me. And of course, the plot is probably one of the most unique one's I've seen in a very long time. Huge kudos for that, and here's hoping that Kestrel is packing to see the fairy godmother and not to just run away. Either way...this should be ...fun. ^_^
Grey's Princess 2008-06-03 ch 3,	abuseGiggle giggle! This is great! Waiting anxiously for more hilarity
blacksunflower 2008-06-03 ch 3,	abuseXD I loved this story the moment I read the first chapter, and it's getting even better as I go on. I love, love, love Emmaline, she has this likable sardonic voice and a really sarcastic thing that is just irresistibly funny. The short chapters are nice, I guess it kind of fits the shortness in her personality. It's like she's impatient with even talking to you, but she's kind of enjoying it too, I don't know how to explain it. As much as I love your, it's still so much of a fairy tale, the kind that never fail to depress me. XD Kestrel's just too amazing to be real, lol~~ Anyway, I can't wait for you to continue! I'll be looking forward to it. ~Helenn
Lady-CheshireXIII 2008-06-02 ch 3,	abusevery good so far, but would it kill you to do a spell check?
ME! 2008-04-14 ch 2, anon.	abuseAwesome! I LOVE IT! Please update it realy soon!
laureola-lunes 2008-04-09 ch 2,	abusewow. Disney would be so much more entertaining if you wrote for them. (compliment) funny, cute, nice sarcastic tone, keep going! ~LL~
Seisaset 2008-04-08 ch 2,	abusehaha i loved this chapter. please update soon :)

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