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| Alyson.xox 2008-10-01 ch 11,  | abuseTray for sure. He so sweet :) |
| qtkemi 2008-09-29 ch 11, | abuseTRAY! ALWAYS TRAY! please please plz plz plz PLEASE dont pair up jael w/ ashton...PLEASE! |
| sooner or later its over 2008-09-27 ch 11, | abusetray. and im glad everyone's starting to stand up against Breea, she's evil |
| CocoDogsBark 2008-09-27 ch 11, | abuseSo I just started reading this, after searching for hours for a good story to read. let me just say- you have satisfied my need for a good story...Until i got to the last chapter! D: I can't wait for the next update, and in response to your poll- Tray is cool, but Ashton is really hot. He sounds totally sexy. Sometimes I wish FP character were real! |
| qtkemi 2008-09-26 ch 10, | abuseokay...go agead and shoot me for thinking this, but when i first opened the story and started reading it, i thought it was going to be one of those juvenille clich stories...boy was i wrong...this is an excellent story d id like to applaude u 4 that...btw, i love jael! and tay! |
| An Inside Joke 2008-09-18 ch 2, | abuseThe charecter descriptions seem to dwell a lot on how people look. I'd like to see more emphasis on how they act and talk, as right now, it seems a bit surface-level. |
| An Inside Joke 2008-09-13 ch 1, | abuseI like the subtle introdcution of exposition, and you did a great job of starting right in the middle of the action. I don't usually like this sort of story, but you wrote the first chapter really well, so I'm interested to see what future chapters will bring. |
| Rhythm.Of.My.Soul 2008-08-30 ch 10, | abuseGREATNESS as usual! I absolutely loved everything. Poor Tray :( missing his Jael. |
| Alyson.xox 2008-08-29 ch 1, | abuseabsolutly loved it! :) Can't wait for the next chapter, It just keeps getting more and more interesting. Xox Alyson |
| Rhythm.Of.My.Soul 2008-08-12 ch 9, | abuseGreat chapter, I absolutely loved it!! Ooh! Secrets secrets with the whole silvers thing. ARG WHEN ARE YOU GOING TO REVEAL WHAT THAT IS?!?!? haha. Great chapter, I absolutely loved it. |
| Rhythm.Of.My.Soul 2008-07-10 ch 8, | abuseHaha. Harper's okay. I dunno, she just doesn't seem threatening to me especially since Jael doesn't find her intimidating at all. I'm glad she has a backbone though :) Hmm, this bulldog thing is interesting. How did you come up with it? Did it ever happen to you or something? Great chapter, have fun in Canada! |
| Rhythm.Of.My.Soul 2008-06-30 ch 7, | abuseHaha. Yeah my favorite part was definitely the flashback with Kaden laughing his butt off at Jael. This was a REALLY great chapter. It was interesting. I love the development between Tray. Hmm, why did Harper go and follow Breea? Are the close or something? Great quote at the end, did you make it up? GREAT Jael vs Breea scene. I LOVED IT! Fav girl would have to be Harper. I dunno, she reminds me of how I used to be. Quiet and bookish and whatnot :) |
| unwound-dreams 2008-06-27 ch 6, | abuseHey! I'm loving this so far. My vote is for Tray & Jael 100%. |
| RunFree 2008-06-26 ch 6, anon. | abuseTRAY...good. |
| Rhythm.Of.My.Soul 2008-06-24 ch 6, | abuseHEY! I loved the chapter, filler though it was. It still had lots of good stuff. I think I would like Tray and Jael because that would cause drama with Naomi and in her jealous anger she might spill the beans about the silver bands :) |