|Reviews for Be Still|
| bella.fleur 3/23/08 . chapter 1
Wow. I agree with TMO. At the end, there really is stillness.
And I can actually picture the scene, somehow. I could see soldiers, crouching down and looking around just waiting, and being silent.
| The Melissa Occult 3/22/08 . chapter 1
I must say, out of the entire thing, I liked the ending the best. The poem as you wrote it, is a fluid thing, a thing in motion, and you end it by saying "Be still." which I think is fitting given the poem. Once the poem stops, there really is stillness.