Reviews for Meaning of Word - FictionPress.com

xilaberry 2008-03-23 ch 1,	abusehm... So, I like it, but I have a few comments. First, I think the line 'and different varieties too' doesn't really flow. I think something like 'used in different ways' might be better. I think you use the word 'word' to much, and it makes the poem too choppy and repetitive. in the line 'or just confuse you even more' i think you could cut out the 'just' and just say 'or confuse you even more' I think repeating 'word' twice at the beginning isn't the best idea. I would cut out one of those. I also don't really like the line 'is up to the person who speaks it' I don't think it flows very well. I'm not sure what to use instead, but something that flows better would be good. Yeah. So it was good. I liked all the different images and ways you talk about a word. There are just those couple things.
Tranquil Thorns 2008-03-23 ch 1,	abuseNice idea. You covered everything a word can stand for. At least, everything I would have thought of. In the line 'Cause in the end a word' the 'cause' bugged me a little, because it seems so informal compared to the rest of the word. I'd change it to 'because', but maybe that's just me. Anywho, good work!
Valeria de Beaumont 2008-03-23 ch 1,	abuseWow, I learned something o.o Great job ^^! I guess it's true. People can get inspired by ANYTHING.