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| SavannahX 2008-07-01 ch 2,  | abuseHey! I like this! You really should update sometime soon. It's definitly got a good plot line to it and you should update! =) |
| SavannahX 2008-07-01 ch 1, | abuseHey! I like it! I'm going to go on to the second chapter but I thought I would review this first so you got an extra review. |
| skibird17 2008-05-24 ch 2, | abuseVery suspenseful! I can't wait for the next chapter! :D |
| skibird17 2008-05-24 ch 1, | abuseI really like this so far! You write very well, and the ending is a huge cliffhanger! |
| Ashley Lampost 2008-04-13 ch 2, | abuseAnd the meaning of the chapter is revealed! The suspense is building and building, and I'm really enjoying it. Gosh, I hope the parents don't not pay because their daughter isn't missing. (try to figure out that triple negative...) You are a great writer. I was a tad bit confused about the American bathroom thing, but that might just be because the only time I went to England I was too young to even remember it, let alone see anything different about the bathrooms... Please up date soon; I can't wait to read more! ~Ashley the Lampost~ |
| Stella Luella Chick 2008-04-10 ch 2, | abuseYay, another chapter! Tis so suspenseful. Wonder what's gonna happen when they find out she's not the person they wanted... One thing that caught my attention... When it talks about the bathroom and lack of a bathtub... Erm.. We Americans do have bathtubs o.o Is that an English thing though? Everybody has bathtubs? Here everyone has both a shower and a tub. Some people only use one, so they might not have the other as well, but I think that almost everyone has both. |
| Ashley Lampost 2008-03-27 ch 1, | abuseSorry to leave you wondering, I was in a hurry somewhere, and I hardly had time to finish the story, but I knew that if I just left it I would somehow forget all about it, so I hastily added it to my alerts. So far I think this story sounds great, and has excellent potential for the future. It's somewhat confusing, but my guess is that that's because you wanted to leave the reader wondering what is going on. The element of suspense at the end is truly magnificent. I look forward to read more of this, and I once again apologize for leaving you wondering. ~Ash~ |
| Stella Luella Chick 2008-03-23 ch 1, | abuseOoh, I'm so pulled in already! If you update, I will read. |