 l3g3nd 2008-05-03 . chapter 1OMG, this is definitely a beautiful story!
I like the poem the guy have written for the guy, and then, also the guy giving her a gladiolus! I love the concept!
But what it lacks might be a bit more emotional, in depth descriptions. Haha...
Anyway, good job, Lycan! Beautiful story you have here...:)
Happy writing. |